Starry Night

February 22, 2009
Under this starry night
We lay without a fright
Learning of ourselves
Through the lips of someone else

Laying on the ground
We don't hide ourselves
And open up inside
And let the other in

Inside of ourselves
We learn about each other
Through an open mouth
And with an open soul

Under this starry night
Just a normal night
We both have seen
The other side of me





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Kevin said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 3:44 am
That's a good poem
 
born_to_be_french said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 4:29 pm
Hey Adam, it's Emily. Your poetry is astonishing, and I think you should get published in a magazine. Well, Good luck, and I hope you succeed.
 
Laskeygirl08 said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 3:26 pm
Im so proud of you baby! I love you. This is just the begining of your great career. I support you all the way babe! This poem is a great way to let everyone see how good of a writter you are. I love you hadnsom keep it up and dont stop writting ever, your so good at it!
 
Sammie08 said...
Mar. 6, 2009 at 4:10 pm
Im one of mollie's friends. I think this is pretty good. keep it up.
 
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