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When Daddy Left Me.

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Looking at the empty seat at the
breakfast table.
Looking at the empty side of
mummy's wardrobe.
Looking at the empty space in
the driveway.
Looking at the empty
cigarette ash tray.
Looking at all of these empty things,
reminds me of the day,
when Daddy left me.





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Katie.T. said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 4:59 pm
beautiful <3
 
Jordon. replied...
Jan. 5, 2010 at 1:53 am
thank you all for the lovely comments :) xo
 
Jaquie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 5:06 am
Very well done. Keep writing.
God bless,
...,
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Oct. 19, 2009 at 1:58 pm
Awe this poem could almost make you cry... but its well written
 
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