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Constructive criticism the wall beneath me
Cement cracking and piling slipping
Not the fault of builder unaware
But of the burden it is that the burden has to bear.

Society underestimates those strong people
Who can appreciate building up to be torn down, and,
Without batting an eye, look their work in the face and say:
At least it was a good try.





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