Scream

February 28, 2009
By Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
42 articles 0 photos 219 comments

I sit here.
And I hate.
My breaking point near
Help is coming, but it is too late

I want to scream
But I only comply with silence
This is a bad dream
Living in violence

Gone, what has been taken
Part of my heart
Am I mistaken?
Will my feelings ever start?

Heat, climbs my face
I see without reason
Fears I want to chase
Through this broken soul season

They cut me
They tell me to go
im worthless, I agree
I am searching for answers nobody knows

Feel a heart beat in my fist
I need to run, to stop
My thoughts refuse untwist
I am walking to that thousand foot drop


I hope I hit the end
Mabe then they'll listen
To the loud screaming signals I send
IM TIRED Of THIS LAND OF PRETEND

I will scream
DO YOU HEAR ME?
You live in a dream
Just please, please let me be free

I will cry
I believe you, life isn't fair
Don't try to lie
I am not your person, I have my own dare

LOOK AT THIS
This person isn't real
Only the outer shell seems to exist
Would you PLEASE just try to feel?

I hate
Do you know?
There is no such thing as freakin fate
So just GO

Touch me one more time
Oh you love me? LIKE HELL
to what heights you climb
but I already fell

I am no longer quiet
I have a soul severe
Just let me out into the night
I DON'T WANT YOU NEAR


Talk to me, you say
I am speaking loud and clear
You are the kind to betray
You aren't sincer.


Im mad
But you wont see
im nothing you ever had
IM ME

SCREAMING
AND CRYING
AND RUNNING
AND FLYING,
YOU REFUSE TO LISTEN,
I TRY TO TELL
THESE TEARS ONLY GLISTEN
I WILL NOT LIVE IN YOUR SPELL
LET ME GO.LET ME GO.

im done.
im dead.
i loved you.
this isnt wrong.
i hated you.
you were not strong.


im crying. im crying.
dont look at me.
im dying. im dying.
just. let. me. be. free.


The author's comments:
I have to say i hit rock bottom. im hurting and writing helps. hoping this will help you.

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 12:03 am
rawrpiranha SILVER, Godfrey, Illinois
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this part was the best to me:

"Oh you love me? LIKE HELL
to what heights you climb
but I already fell"

^it sounds like a song by bring me the horizon.

LOVE.


on Jan. 7 2010 at 9:18 pm
MeganAnne PLATINUM, Niskayuna, New York
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Favorite Quote:
All my life I've looked at words as if I were seeing them for the first time. ~Ernest Hemingway

Oh my God...I loved this. I felt the anger in your heart, the angst in your soul... I felt your need to be free. Amazing. Purely amazing.

on Oct. 19 2009 at 1:57 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I love the emotion... you can feel the rush of it in your poem... I love it

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on Sep. 19 2009 at 8:42 pm
coretha GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
sweet things come in dreams...(cj franklin)

i love it

check my work...

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:39 am
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Very compelling. There were a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, but its not a crime. I wouldn't say its really good, but it could be, because its already decent. You definately have a flair for poetry, and with some fine-tuning, I think you could be a great writer.

on Jul. 30 2009 at 5:20 pm
RachelEliza PLATINUM, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when theyre right, and sometimes good things fall apart so that better things can fall together -Marilyn Monroe

this honestly made me cry. once again, ive been there.

great poem:) keep it up. and keep going.

on Mar. 25 2009 at 2:07 pm
Summer Kersh BRONZE, Poteau, Oklahoma
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WOW!! i love it so much emotion. and that is exactly how i am feeling at this very moment.

on Mar. 5 2009 at 5:13 pm
eternal*sunshine SILVER, Seabrook, Texas
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That is an amazing poem. Especially the way you managed to rhyme everything while keeping the flow. The emotion is very real.


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