The Real World

February 15, 2009
By BannedGeekII SILVER, Commack, New York
BannedGeekII SILVER, Commack, New York
8 articles 0 photos 17 comments

In the real world all of your hard work will pay off.
Pay off.
In the real world all this won't madder.
Waiting.
Waiting.
Where is my prize?
Don't worry.
It's coming soon.
You will do well.
Waiting.
Waiting.
When?
This 'real world'.
Will it ever come?
All my hard work.
Will it ever madder?
What I did?
Can I live yet?
Will I ever be me?
All my hard work.
It doesn't madder.
No, I know it is true.
Waiting.
Waiting.
It is never coming.
This,
This 'real world'.
Sacrificed my childhood.
It stops now!
The person inside of me is just Dying to come out.
And live.
Live in today and stop preparing for the,
FAKE, REAL WORLD.



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cree8ive GOLD said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 5:24 pm
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson

thanks for commenting on my poem "head over heels". i love your use of repetition, i think it's very effective. i'd consider not using punctuation at the end of every line. in poetry it can cause kind of an undesireable break in the flow, and it really isn't necessary. good job though!


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