Unclench

February 10, 2009
By oracle-of-nonsense PLATINUM, Winnabow, North Carolina
oracle-of-nonsense PLATINUM, Winnabow, North Carolina
37 articles 4 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are born with two incurable diseases -- life, from which we die; and hope, which says maybe death isn’t the end."
- Andrew Greeley


Watching the star fall from the dark velvet blue,
she threw away her daisy.

The author's comments:
I was recently introduced to the imagist poets, and have since discovered that I find them brilliant in their seeming simplicity. So, of course, I gave it a try. This is the result.

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on Nov. 2 2009 at 6:25 pm
oracle-of-nonsense PLATINUM, Winnabow, North Carolina
37 articles 4 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are born with two incurable diseases -- life, from which we die; and hope, which says maybe death isn’t the end."
- Andrew Greeley

Thank you. :) It was meant to be that short, as I was trying out the imagist style. There's a lot of good stuff in that style, just Google it.

bamboom212 said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 3:29 pm
I agree with Adrianna. I like it alot, but maybe it could've been longer. Very deep :)

on May. 23 2009 at 9:48 pm
DinosoarJen DIAMOND, Scottsville, New York
86 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just another casualty.
It's sad but true.
And even dead I'm still ahead
of most of you.

Interestingly deep.

Love it.



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on Apr. 19 2009 at 5:11 pm
adriannalovesanime GOLD, Reidsville, North Carolina
17 articles 5 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's better to be hurt by the truth than to gain satisfaction from the lies.-David Allan

This is good,but maybe you could have added more but I do like this:)


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