Unclench

Watching the star fall from the dark velvet blue,
she threw away her daisy.





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bamboom212 said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 3:29 pm
I agree with Adrianna. I like it alot, but maybe it could've been longer. Very deep :)
 
oracle-of-nonsense This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 6:25 pm
Thank you. :) It was meant to be that short, as I was trying out the imagist style. There's a lot of good stuff in that style, just Google it.
 
DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 23, 2009 at 9:48 pm
Interestingly deep.
Love it.

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adriannalovesanime said...
Apr. 19, 2009 at 5:11 pm
This is good,but maybe you could have added more but I do like this:)
 
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