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By Anonymous, Las Vegas, NV
Photo credit: Jena S., Cameron, WI
Piles of hideous
dimensions of weeds
vine twisted knots
crawling like eyes
in the kaleidoscope amber

Filth crawling diagonally
detained in ratty bags
fragile glass balls
shattering on the pavement
where the lies wait

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summerhillshamrock said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 12:38 am:

Love the kaleidoscope part, good vocabulary.

 
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purplehaze said...
Feb. 22, 2009 at 4:28 pm:

great description

 
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