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You mean alot to me.
Yet dont even realise it.
You set my heart on fire when you speak.
Yet you won't stop talking.
When you leave I can't stop crying.
Yet you keep on leaving.
When you brush against me.
I wish you were mine.
Yet you keep brushing against me and not being mine.
When our eyes meet, I can't breathe.
Yet I die everyday.
What you do to me hurts.
Yet your oblivious to my pain.





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glory2u said...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 4:58 pm
This is awesome :) And I know this feeling exactly... I feel it everyday Great job
 
Dimple said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 8:56 am

Oh my! You wrote down my thoughts! Yo have wonderful talent, and trust me, you're going places! 

Keep up the awesome work!

 
Greendaylover:) said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 5:23 pm
this reminds me of me and my ex bf :( u are veryy talented ! u make me feel when u write!
 
Nerdy-Bookworm said...
Jan. 28, 2011 at 12:04 pm
this reminds me of my friend and i. we had a "thing" but something happened. this is realli good!!!! keep on writin
 
kirby~bug said...
May 6, 2010 at 1:26 pm
sounds like me and my relationship w/ a "friend" who i want more from but hes oblivious!!:(
 
Lily B. said...
Sept. 6, 2009 at 8:28 pm
This poem reminds me of the song Beauty From Pain by Superchic[k]. Look it up, I think you'll like it. <3
 
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