What you do to me

February 2, 2009
By iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
14 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
The bad things happen first,then the good things, then more bad things, then more good things: God helps us through the bad things so we can enjoy the good ones. :)


You mean alot to me.
Yet dont even realise it.
You set my heart on fire when you speak.
Yet you won't stop talking.
When you leave I can't stop crying.
Yet you keep on leaving.
When you brush against me.
I wish you were mine.
Yet you keep brushing against me and not being mine.
When our eyes meet, I can't breathe.
Yet I die everyday.
What you do to me hurts.
Yet your oblivious to my pain.


The author's comments:
Sometimes wierd stuff come into my head. Like little phrases and saying. And i just try to make something beautiful out of it. Well atleast its beautiful to me. Hope you feel the same.

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glory2u GOLD said...
on Jan. 15 2012 at 4:58 pm
glory2u GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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This is awesome :) And I know this feeling exactly... I feel it everyday Great job

on Nov. 10 2011 at 8:56 am
QueenOfMars GOLD, Mumbai, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"

Oh my! You wrote down my thoughts! Yo have wonderful talent, and trust me, you're going places! 

Keep up the awesome work!


on Oct. 19 2011 at 5:23 pm
this reminds me of me and my ex bf :( u are veryy talented ! u make me feel when u write!

on Jan. 28 2011 at 12:04 pm
Nerdy-Bookworm BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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this reminds me of my friend and i. we had a "thing" but something happened. this is realli good!!!! keep on writin

kirby~bug said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:26 pm
sounds like me and my relationship w/ a "friend" who i want more from but hes oblivious!!:(

on Sep. 6 2009 at 8:28 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
35 articles 0 photos 82 comments
This poem reminds me of the song Beauty From Pain by Superchic[k]. Look it up, I think you'll like it. <3


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