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Undefined.

You shadow your flaws
with a hand-made crystal ball
exploring my indecisiveness
& captivating my reasoning;

darling

from an astronomical pitcher
you might as well pour
your lingering emotions
from a bewildering altitude
into my broken hands
because behind those eyes

nothing but tears will be liquidated.




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miss-silverwing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 24, 2010 at 10:39 am:
Nice. I'm not sure I totally? understand everything that's going on in this poem, but it's very pretty, and I think I got the general gist of what's going on. Either way, you have a way with words.
 
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CoLdEsTNiGhTs said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 4:51 pm:
truely a beautiful poem. i apologize, havent been on here so often :) but i love this poem. everything about it. even the picture you chose relates so perfectly and just ties the words together even more.
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 2:56 pm:
awesome. i luvv this
 
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HBCdance This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2009 at 8:44 pm:
AMAZING! SOOOO GOOD! I LOOOVED IT!

One thing though: I'd change the
 
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