Undefined.

February 2, 2009
By amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
9 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
maybe i know that you'll crave my secure arms someday, but i'll have come across someone who wasn't afraid. and that's why i can't let go.


You shadow your flaws
with a hand-made crystal ball
exploring my indecisiveness
& captivating my reasoning;

darling

from an astronomical pitcher
you might as well pour
your lingering emotions
from a bewildering altitude
into my broken hands
because behind those eyes

nothing but tears will be liquidated.



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on Dec. 24 2010 at 10:39 am
miss-silverwing GOLD, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
I'd like to flood the streets of your heart with everything I cannot say.

Nice. I'm not sure I totally? understand everything that's going on in this poem, but it's very pretty, and I think I got the general gist of what's going on. Either way, you have a way with words.

on Nov. 16 2010 at 4:51 pm
-LeftBehindBroken- GOLD, Providence, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Artists paint on canvas; Musicians paint on silence

truely a beautiful poem. i apologize, havent been on here so often :) but i love this poem. everything about it. even the picture you chose relates so perfectly and just ties the words together even more.

on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:56 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

awesome. i luvv this

on Jul. 6 2009 at 8:44 pm
HBCdance BRONZE, Ann Arbor, Michigan
3 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish." - John Jakes

AMAZING! SOOOO GOOD! I LOOOVED IT!



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