DE WILD DIVE-speckless

January 29, 2009
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Walkin on A road,
A prick of thron,
never mind , never told,
days N night suffeled soon,
A sir mountain oef thorney feyness,
Admidst de crops sown,
Helpless, made uzz worthless,
Feyness, de CHILD LABOUR....
Our dreamz get done sweatless,
Clinchin them to A carin HARBOUR.....
A proactive warmth to strive,
Xtinguishin t'er pain N gushin A tour,
And giftin tem with A WILD DIVE.


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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 25, 2009 at 5:01 pm
This is really good. I'm not sure if this is a dialect you're using in this piece or if its really the way you speak, but either one, I think it is very attention grabbing. I love it!!! Good job!
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