DE WILD DIVE-speckless

January 29, 2009
By shaber BRONZE, Thiruvannamalai, Other
shaber BRONZE, Thiruvannamalai, Other
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Walkin on A road,
A prick of thron,
never mind , never told,
days N night suffeled soon,
A sir mountain oef thorney feyness,
Admidst de crops sown,
Helpless, made uzz worthless,
Feyness, de CHILD LABOUR....
Our dreamz get done sweatless,
Clinchin them to A carin HARBOUR.....
A proactive warmth to strive,
Xtinguishin t'er pain N gushin A tour,
And giftin tem with A WILD DIVE.

SAY NO TO CHILD LABOUR

The author's comments:
MORAL-stop child labour

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on Jun. 25 2009 at 5:01 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is really good. I'm not sure if this is a dialect you're using in this piece or if its really the way you speak, but either one, I think it is very attention grabbing. I love it!!! Good job!


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