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By , red hook, NY
there is no way to say it.
there is no way to hear it.
the eyes have been closed long enough;
we stand in the wind,
tears in our eyes,
in our hearts;
Have you no shame?
to tell me the unspeakable lies,
the beauty of your voice,
it made them fine to hear,
like melodies;
the melodies are curses,
wretching my soul from it's abyss.
there are no words to say it.
there are no words to hear it.
i gave you it all,
with nothing of it to show.
you took it all,
without a second thought.
and if you gave me a second chance,
a second chance at this undeniable suicide,
this heart wrentching homicide,
this horrid sentencing?
i would not change a thing.
there is no way to deny it.
there is no way to understand it.
it's hell.
it's love.





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anomalei said...
Feb. 8, 2009 at 3:36 pm
this is fantastic, truly. i like the repetition, yet it wasn't too much - which can happen a lot.
i hoped you like your own work, and i sincerely hope you keep writing.
 
BALLETGIRLL said...
Feb. 8, 2009 at 12:37 am
OMGG THIS POEMM WAS ABSOLUTLY AMZING THIS IS THE EXACT SAME STORY OF ME AND A BOY WHO I LOVED, LOVED ME , THEN BROKE MY HEART. SO TRUST ME I CAN RELATE AMAZINGG JOBB!!<3 BRAVVA
 
nerda165 said...
Feb. 6, 2009 at 4:20 pm
this poem is such an awsome poem, i really like it and think that u did a really good job on it. hope too see abother poem from you cuz this one was so awsome.
 
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