In The Music Box

January 23, 2009
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a dancing figurine
so beautifully sad
in its stillness
only coming to life
at the will of a hand
and in the eyes
of a little girl
spinning along
to the music
until it stops
sadly, forcefully
once again
into stillness

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JillianHale said...
Apr. 4, 2009 at 2:21 pm
I like how you used personification in this one. Very good and descriptively explained. It's also really cool how you incorporated the music box into such a great poem because you loved to dance and it gives it more emotion. :] good job.
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