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The Coming Storm

January 21, 2009
By Ashley Nabors PLATINUM, Lubbock, Texas
Ashley Nabors PLATINUM, Lubbock, Texas
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Lightening Dances
Across The Darkened Blue Sky
Angry Clouds Race By

In A Fit Of Rage
Nature Reaches Down, Quickly
Touches A House Below

White Spear of Fire, Flares
Punches With Might And Power
To Destroy Man's Home


The author's comments:
Nature's Fury Can Be Dangerously Exciting!

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erin b. said...
on Apr. 29 2009 at 7:32 pm
this is really great. i love the imagery in it. you can really feel the storm!

Gman123 said...
on Mar. 9 2009 at 4:21 pm
Very great this should get published

Jason said...
on Feb. 27 2009 at 5:19 pm
Oh WOW! This is probably one of the best Haiku's I have ever read!!

Daddy said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 5:38 pm
Very good jake, very good choice of words.

bigyak said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 5:37 pm
nice jake i like!!!! haha you da man

Jimmy said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 5:34 pm
This poem is great! It makes me cry every time i read it.

on Feb. 10 2009 at 5:34 pm
Great poem

SamWalton said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 8:47 pm
HAIIIIIIIIKUUU

These are awsome.

Keep up up the work yo.

gem said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 8:47 pm
I loved the description uesed, good job!!

jastra said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 8:43 pm
this is a good poem

on Feb. 5 2009 at 8:38 pm
very amazing! great use of imagery :) i am very impressed

Trish said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 8:31 pm
excellent!

Sid said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 3:29 am
I am impressed by Jakes use of images and his ability to create emotion and mood in such a short space.



Congratulations Mr. Jake! An excellent Haiku that describes the power of nature!



Can not wait to see what you write next!