The Coming Storm

January 21, 2009
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Lightening Dances
Across The Darkened Blue Sky
Angry Clouds Race By

In A Fit Of Rage
Nature Reaches Down, Quickly
Touches A House Below

White Spear of Fire, Flares
Punches With Might And Power
To Destroy Man's Home





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erin b. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 7:32 pm
this is really great. i love the imagery in it. you can really feel the storm!
 
Gman123 said...
Mar. 9, 2009 at 4:21 pm
Very great this should get published
 
Jason said...
Feb. 27, 2009 at 5:19 pm
Oh WOW! This is probably one of the best Haiku's I have ever read!!
 
Daddy said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 5:38 pm
Very good jake, very good choice of words.
 
bigyak said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 5:37 pm
nice jake i like!!!! haha you da man
 
Jimmy said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 5:34 pm
This poem is great! It makes me cry every time i read it.
 
sdklajf ioasdjfisd said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 5:34 pm
Great poem
 
SamWalton said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 8:47 pm
HAIIIIIIIIKUUU
These are awsome.
Keep up up the work yo.
 
gem said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 8:47 pm
I loved the description uesed, good job!!
 
jastra said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 8:43 pm
this is a good poem
 
JakersLoverrr said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 8:38 pm
very amazing! great use of imagery :) i am very impressed
 
Trish said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 8:31 pm
excellent!
 
Sid said...
Feb. 5, 2009 at 3:29 am
I am impressed by Jakes use of images and his ability to create emotion and mood in such a short space.

Congratulations Mr. Jake! An excellent Haiku that describes the power of nature!

Can not wait to see what you write next!
 
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