Insisto

SLOWLY: my feet stumble
Carelessly along the rocky road
I explore.
Not knowing WHEN or HOW I will reach my
Final destination, my mind pushes me
Forward into the world unknown:



I AM FREE.

INEVITABLY: markings begin to appear,
Directing me,
Revealing where others have ventured:
Where my future may lie.



I FOLLOW.
The neglected paths lay barren for someone else:

AM I FREE?


NOW: We tread carefully over
The fallen rocks, our final destination in view
From where I stand
Among many.
Only our mind is free to wonder at what we have lost:


*Title is latin: to enter upon a journey; follow





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Perfectionist_101 said...
Mar. 26, 2009 at 2:43 pm
wow anja that is the coolest i hav read yet it is actually amazin n so deep it is really cool!!!
ciara
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Mark123 said...
Mar. 23, 2009 at 7:57 pm
Very insightful and deep - could be used for musical lyrics
 
innergenious745 said...
Mar. 17, 2009 at 12:43 am
in genious, i love how there's like a hidden meaning to it, it's so fascanating ;) keep writing you've got sreious talent!
 
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