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Fading...

January 16, 2009
By Anonymous

The light is fading
from my eyes.
The world is ending
in disguise.
Can't you see what
you've done?
You've killed me, my blood
it runs.
Runs down the hallway
down the stairs.
Forms a puddle,
no one's there.
The darkness
it creeps.
Toward me, in me
it seeps.
What are going
to say,
when my mother
prays and prays.
Why did you
do this?
You have fallen
in the abyss.
You said you
loved me.
But now I'm just
rotting debris.
My heart,
it slows.
Your mind,
it knows.
Knows what
you've done.
Now you've
won,
over me and there
is none.
None left of
my soul.
You'd better
dig a hole.
Place me
oh so gently.
I wish this had
gone differently.
I hear your
cries, although
the light is fading
from my eyes.

The author's comments:
This started out a small poem submitted on a site that I'm on often, but I decided to revise it and send it in here, thanks to someone I know who showed me this site. So, there. ^^

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__katalyst said...
on Feb. 10 2009 at 9:11 pm
Thanks Bec. [[[[;

Becca said...
on Feb. 9 2009 at 12:12 pm
Yay! *hugs* Very good, I liked it! Even though it's quite creepy....:)

__katalyst said...
on Feb. 5 2009 at 1:54 am
Thanks muchly Shadow. [[[;

on Feb. 2 2009 at 12:11 am
This is REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY good! Nice job!