January 17, 2009
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Silence. Taciturn. Muteness.
These three words can barely describe
What a lonely person feels inside.
For some feelings can not be expressed in words.
We feel a different pain,
This pain is not physical by any means,
But more of a cold breeze that blows through the soul.
It alerts the mind and numbs the heart.
The only word to describe this triggering ache is
Alone. For loneliness is the ultimate pain.

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AquaGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 12:27 pm
Great job on this! I really liked your description. I also think this flows very well.
dreamer_believer said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 6:35 pm
very rythmic. you described all the things it feels like to be alone. great job. thanks for your comments by the way, i appreciate it. keep writing!
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