Alone

January 17, 2009
By lightbearer GOLD, North Bloomfield, Ohio
lightbearer GOLD, North Bloomfield, Ohio
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Silence. Taciturn. Muteness.
These three words can barely describe
What a lonely person feels inside.
For some feelings can not be expressed in words.
We feel a different pain,
This pain is not physical by any means,
But more of a cold breeze that blows through the soul.
It alerts the mind and numbs the heart.
The only word to describe this triggering ache is
Alone. For loneliness is the ultimate pain.



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AquaGem SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:27 pm
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.

Great job on this! I really liked your description. I also think this flows very well.

on Aug. 20 2009 at 6:35 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

very rythmic. you described all the things it feels like to be alone. great job. thanks for your comments by the way, i appreciate it. keep writing!


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