Destruction

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Fire will rain
the earth will fall
none will remain
it destroys us all
water will rise
to burry the ashes
everything dies
as the earth crashes
nothing is left
forever it is gone
nothing is left
no house no lawn
nothing is left
all burnt in the sun
nothing is left
the earth is done
but your soul lives on
though all else is gone
will you burn in the sun
or live forever with the son





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MortalDreamer5 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 18, 2014 at 9:24 pm
Nice! You're a great poet!
 
torza said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 4:23 am
wow that is an excellent poem i loved it i read it over about 5 times thats what i feel like at the momment it gave me goosebumps this is amazing
xx
 
theguywhowrotethis221 said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 12:52 am
wow. how did i make it all the way up to 16 on the most popular list. thanks everyone. i have more on the way so look for it when it comes.
 
Joy26 said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 2:56 am
What can I say but amazing! I love the rhythmic pattern and conciseness you employ to get across your implicating message. Wow. Please keep writing!
One question...the word "lawn" in the twelfth line seems a little out of place with the rest of your slightly morbid, serious words... could you possibly find something else to rhyme with "done"? Otherwise, great.
And the last two lines remain my favorites.
 
SkaterGurl said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 11:41 pm
AMEN!!!!!!!!! i'ma Christian! i love it! nice work!
 
theguywhowrotethis221 said...
Jan. 20, 2009 at 10:51 pm
Well i happened to make it on the popular list. please comment on it and vote. (hope it wasn't just my friends who voted...)
 
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