Don't give up on me

January 6, 2009
Please don’t give up on me
There are so many things I want to tell you
If you just listened to me, took the time to talk to me.

Do you believe in me?

I don’t know what to think
I love you very much and I want you in my life
I want to tell you about all my ups and downs, my hopes and dreams, my love and loss.

About who I am

Did I do something wrong?

I miss you and I need you just as much as you need me
I’m still your little girl
Always will be

Don’t give up on me. I won’t give up on you.





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lsp91 said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 6:47 pm
Riveting!!! It really pulls at the hear strings!! I need more!
 
cas said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 9:46 pm
This is very touching les, i want more! :)
 
Aunt Terri said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 1:04 am
Amazing Writing!

Very Real, it made me sad!
 
Troubs said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 1:13 am
Great writing, very expressive.
 
Uncle Sam said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 1:19 am
I am speechless...very thougtful.

I am interested!
 
Tim said...
Jan. 26, 2009 at 3:20 pm
Great job! There is heartfelt raw emotion in your writing.
 
Belinda said...
Jan. 26, 2009 at 3:16 am
great poem! It really pulls at the heart strings! Keep writting.
:)
 
Aunt Candi said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 10:18 pm
WOW! You have an amazing talent for writing from your heart. Continue to love, feel, and write.
 
Kade said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 10:17 pm
Very nice work.
 
Mom said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 10:10 pm
As your mom it makes me cry!
 
OldG-Ma said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 7:40 am
A very telling and heart felt poem. Keep up the writing.
 
TWIN#1 said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 12:54 am
Oh my god I loved it. I can relate to it so much!! Write more!
 
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