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Erased

January 5, 2009
By Anonymous

When no one listens
when no one picks you
up when your down
when you yourself
cant explain that frown
when you cry
no one hears
as your eyes swell with
tears,what no one has saw
is never there
as you scream
"i hate life, it isn't fair!"
without love you can not live
and no one else has it to give
that is when truly you are
ERASED

One needs love to live


The author's comments:
Thanks for the insperation.

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joy26 said...
on Jan. 16 2009 at 7:48 pm
Wow!! I really like this poem because of its connection to teen life. Suggestion - try not capitalizing "ERASED"?