I though

January 4, 2009
By xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
xXpoetryaiXx SILVER, Jersey City, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Give into love or live in fear"


i thought u were something better

I thought u cared

I thought u see me for me

I thought u actally listened

I thought U Loved me too

I thought u wouldnt make me cry

I thought U would stay with me forever

I thought U made my life brighter

I thought U were the one for me

...But hey Guess what

It was only A thought



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thebest BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 1:47 pm
thebest BRONZE, Egg Harbor Township, New Jersey
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indifference to evil is evil-Elie Wiesel

This is a wonderful poem.

It flows just perfectly

It reminds me of the first time when i tried to talk to a girl.

You have a wonderful and unique talent keep it up i think you found your calling.

on Feb. 16 2010 at 2:31 pm
kissingdarkness SILVER, Mill Creek, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
lets see............ be yourself

i like this!! it reminds me of a person that i thought was the one for me

on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:12 pm
mz.gemini92 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
keep the one yew luv most 1st

i love the flow of the poem...i think that it's so much true.

Very creative

on Nov. 12 2009 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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