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i thought u were something better

I thought u cared

I thought u see me for me

I thought u actally listened

I thought U Loved me too

I thought u wouldnt make me cry

I thought U would stay with me forever

I thought U made my life brighter

I thought U were the one for me

...But hey Guess what

It was only A thought




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MR.EHT said...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 1:47 pm:
This is a wonderful poem.
It flows just perfectly
It reminds me of the first time when i tried to talk to a girl.
You have a wonderful and unique talent keep it up i think you found your calling.
 
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always_invisible said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 2:31 pm:
i like this!! it reminds me of a person that i thought was the one for me
 
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mz.gemini92 said...
Jan. 20, 2010 at 12:12 pm:
i love the flow of the poem...i think that it's so much true.
Very creative
 
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Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 2:52 pm:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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