All Hope Is Gone

January 4, 2009
By gotholla SILVER, Beijing, Other
gotholla SILVER, Beijing, Other
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All hope is gone
all fears are lost
tears up above
have kept me safe from harm
Heartaches ache as rivers flow
sunlight shines but darkness is signed
All hope is gone
all fears are lost
Hearts burst into fire
looking for a cure
When darkness prevails
tears fill the air
keep me warm
keep me safe
Oh chest so firm and meek
just remember not to leave this soul
when all hope is gone


The author's comments:
itz a personal experience
so i decided to write some stuff

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on Nov. 13 2009 at 2:58 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 12 2009 at 4:28 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Oooh, I like this. I couldnt help noticing some albu/song titles here: All Hope is Gone-Slip Knot, and Hearts Burst Into Fire by Bullet For My Valentine. Great job!

-Blessed Be!

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