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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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RaucousRaven said...
today at 7:20 pm
Check me out some feedback would mean the world to me.
 
RaucousRaven said...
today at 7:17 pm
Need Improvement
 
MidnightStorm225 said...
Dec. 17, 2015 at 8:36 am
hit me in the feels
 
DemiRose70510 said...
Nov. 19, 2015 at 2:34 pm
Love it. So relatable
 
tayfreeman. said...
Nov. 10, 2015 at 1:11 pm
I, like many others probably, can relate to this poem so well! And i think that's what makes it great- personal with a strong message but, at the same time, very relatable to readers.
 
WolfLuver said...
Nov. 10, 2015 at 12:35 pm
I like this it reminds me so much of me and my life
 
cartierthefoamposite said...
Nov. 6, 2015 at 9:21 am
Love is a very strong drug of life. This is a true writing of what love can do to two individuals, which is a reason why I love this poem.
 
Queenjonah said...
Nov. 4, 2015 at 2:37 pm
This poem is honestly what I feel about love and being in love. When you say, “I want raw, unrelenting love,” I feel deep inside of my heart what you mean. I understand what is written on an emotional level when it comes to meaning behind the poem. I am in awe with the honesty and emotion that you have put into your work.
 
2cmakaylaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 4, 2015 at 9:58 am
Many teens, including myself, feel as if they can never be loved. “What is wrong with me? What makes me so un-lovable?” are questions that are asked everyday. The poem speaks to me because love is complex; it can be heartbreaking and wonderful all at the same time. I have experienced love, but “I want raw, unrelenting love. The real deal.”
 
loula said...
Nov. 2, 2015 at 10:50 am
beautiful darling. outstanding!
 
Darius_NoblesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 14, 2015 at 10:27 am
TeenInk.com/users/Darius_Nobles Please Leave Constructive Criticism, There's always room for improvement. Thanks Enjoy.
 
DLove said...
Jul. 23, 2015 at 5:19 pm
Love it. described me in every word
 
BritneyAllisonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 22, 2015 at 5:29 am
This poem is pretty sad but beautiful. Please continue to write amazing poems like this one!
 
elisam14 said...
Jun. 9, 2015 at 7:38 pm
Love this, can relate.
 
peystallings said...
Apr. 2, 2015 at 2:17 pm
This is a really good poem, nice word choice! Love it
 
Iamwhoiam16 said...
Mar. 19, 2015 at 5:56 am
I really love the way it was written! :) Great job!
 
Gabbyobelar said...
Feb. 20, 2015 at 9:51 pm
This is a very interesting and lovely poem! Great job and keep it up(:
 
TakeAGuessKataraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19, 2015 at 9:43 pm
An interesting view on love.
 
PeaceCanConquerAll said...
Feb. 5, 2015 at 4:07 pm
very good piece
 
GeorgiaLaz said...
Jan. 26, 2015 at 8:11 pm
This is really interesting and thoughtful...I think it's great!
 
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