Emotional blows of pain

December 19, 2008
By katie griffith, Kresgeville, PA

Stabbing your heart with emotional blows
Blocking your punches with sound breaking words
Loving you like I have never loved someone before
Standing in the rain thinking I don’t care anymore
I think I need some help … from you
I need you to stop assuming
I need you to leave me feelings to me
If I say I’m all right then believe me
If I say that I am ok then let it go
I might tell you how I feel if you stop making me feel like this



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justice said...
on Jan. 3 2009 at 5:41 am
be more specific with your feelings- draw your readers in. this sounds too much like many other poems. be detailed with precise word choice.


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