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Invisible Scars

October 16, 2014
By needyoumorethandope97 SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
needyoumorethandope97 SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a feeling a million words could not describe - me and my friend hannah
Confidence is a Stain you can't wipe off - Lil Wayne


So much hurt and anger,
No room for love
I’m dying to breathe,
She’s the bag suffocating me.

So much hurt and anger,
Give me space I plea
Drowning in my sorrows,
I can’t break free,
Stuck
In another world, she’s the queen bee,
Scared of what may happen,
So I follow her lead.

So much hurt and anger,
She is my enemy.
I will stand up to her,
Show her how it feels,
Her walking all over me.
Today is the day,
I become,
All I am meant to be.


The author's comments:

this poem is about having a friend that walks all over you. at one point in yourlife one of them will but you cant let them. you have to stand tall.


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on Jan. 13 2015 at 11:11 am
needyoumorethandope97 SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a feeling a million words could not describe - me and my friend hannah
Confidence is a Stain you can't wipe off - Lil Wayne

how could i make it better?

on Oct. 21 2014 at 8:15 am
Authorian BRONZE, Coshocton, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
To cry is to let go of all the pain and let the world see you doing it

 This cryptic but understandable, I can relate in some ways and it's a well-written poem.. 7.9/10

on Oct. 17 2014 at 2:17 pm
jdotalways SILVER, Williamsburg, Kentucky
8 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
tis better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all.

This is amazing. Just beautiful!