How are you feeling?

October 16, 2014
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 392 comments

Lock in my throat,
Gag, spit and choke,
My cheeks bruise and bloat
As the man makes a note,
Probably a misquote
Or my thought he re-wrote
maybe a scribble, a quibble, a gloat.

Threadbare stare,
Spine to chair,
Two hours here
For one minute there.
But I wasn’t there
I wouldn’t dare
Remember or care
To remember despair.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 16 2014 at 11:27 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 392 comments
Thanks! So glad you like it!

on Oct. 16 2014 at 10:22 pm
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

oh my dear Lord i love this so.... the rhyming is stellar, and i really appreciate your vocabulary as well.


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