A MESSAGE 2 REMEMBER

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All these oldaz in ur life
Is da only ting u tink is keeping u alive
Coz now u cnt even move wid out a triga bein aimed at ur life
Evry1 jus expects 2 die
An I dnt blame dem
Tell me how many fathers stand by dare side
An how many yearz doz take to live ur life

Let me make tingz a lil bit clearer
I need u but ur never there 4 me
I tried 2 luk 4 u but i neva had da right key
I even dreamed of u but it was hard 4 me to see

So tell me how many tearz are u willin to cry
An how many timez are u willin to try
All these broken hearts dat die each day
It aint coz of poverty
Its coz of wot we say
We dnt even think we chose da rong way
But trust me 1 day where gonna av 2 pay
C I dnt think u undastand but its hard to explain
Even though I tried it still makes me feel pain.

I dnt even no why where goin through dis phase
Whether ur white, black, asian or mixed race
Dnt be dumb an follow da craze
Make sure ur herd an uve had ur say
All u young youths put ur weed, gunz and shankz away
It puts u in trouble an leaves u in pen
An now tell me wot u gunna do den
U aint gunna av no home no family an no frend

So jus hear me out an listen to wot I say
An I hope it makes u feel betta in evry way
We shudnt go round shankin up da people
Coz now evry1 is guna think dat where evil
Not givin us a chance to show dat where equal

An I no u all tried.
But its hard to get away
Dnt listen to dem lies dat people have to say
It jus brakes up ur family an pushes frendz away
Im not telling u dis as a complaint
Im just tryin to help u find da right way

Believe me I went through dis an I thought id be put 2 ma grave
But god is always there for u
Jus dnt 4get 2 pray
Having god in ur life takes away some pain
I think ive sed enough I hope im not hurtin ur brain
But I wish it changes ur life startin 2day

Xx…GOD BLESS…xX





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writer.on.the.loose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2009 at 2:12 am
it was a good poem but thought the txt language took something away from it
 
GOOOOOOOOD said...
Jan. 30, 2009 at 3:00 pm
icant believe u wrote this it is very amazing poem well done and i hop you write more for us keep going M
 
medo said...
Jan. 30, 2009 at 2:57 pm
icant believe u wrote this it is very amazing poem well done and i hop you write more for us keep going good luck
 
elmasry yk sab said...
Jan. 30, 2009 at 2:51 pm
it is very amazing poem well done and i hop you write more for us keep going elmasry must win
 
moonlight said...
Jan. 30, 2009 at 2:33 pm
icant believe u wrote this it is very amazing poem well done and i hop you write more for us keep going
 
MM said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 6:09 pm
This is a very good effort. This might help somebody there to change to better. I hope that a famous SINGER will pick it up and spread it on air for every body. Tolerance is good.
 
Boomting AMARI said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 4:11 pm
DIS POEM IS REALLY GD AN ITS TRUE WAT UV SED KEEP IT UP
PEACE OUT
 
Natz said...
Jan. 13, 2009 at 7:23 pm
this poem is gang fam keep goin i wanna read more
 
MISSTD said...
Jan. 13, 2009 at 4:33 pm
INSPIRATIONAL POEM I THINK EVERY YOUNG PERSON SHOULD READ IT
 
msria said...
Jan. 9, 2009 at 7:58 pm
your poem is really good and very inspirational, well done, keep going
 
>Im @ LeGend< said...
Jan. 7, 2009 at 7:11 pm
just wow amizing poem i like it i hop you write more for us .have agraet day.
 
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