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An eye
that has always
worked quite well
should not
lose its sight
at an awful smell.

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mandygale77 said...
Oct. 9, 2009 at 1:31 pm
Beautiful simplicity!
Selene said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 6:56 pm
This is really good. It's simple, but it's a beautiful metaphor. Keep it up!
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 2:35 pm
I completely agree. Love this poem!
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