This Snowflake

December 8, 2008
By Angel_93 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
Angel_93 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
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These crystal tears fall,
Release me of this pain,
I can’t run anymore,
From this bitter cold,
I’m sorry,
That I let this snowflake;
Melt away
Like the earth beneath our feet,
I’m sorry,
I let you fall;
Like the snow that we once threw,
This crystal white snowflake
That you gave me,
Broke;
Like the very heart in my chest,
Let me keep this broken snowflake,
‘cause the worst is over now,
And the icy blizzard will cover us
With a blanket of snowflakes,
But I want to hold you high;
So you won’t drown in this mess of snow,
I’m sorry,
There’s no one left to find;
This snowflake.


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lexi said...
on Jan. 16 2009 at 5:46 pm
hey cat! i love this one! there isnt anything i would change! its extremely amazing! love, lexi

on Dec. 28 2008 at 11:49 pm
I love this! You are a beautiful writer




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