This Snowflake

December 8, 2008
By Angel_93 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
Angel_93 BRONZE, Royal Oak, Michigan
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These crystal tears fall,
Release me of this pain,
I can’t run anymore,
From this bitter cold,
I’m sorry,
That I let this snowflake;
Melt away
Like the earth beneath our feet,
I’m sorry,
I let you fall;
Like the snow that we once threw,
This crystal white snowflake
That you gave me,
Like the very heart in my chest,
Let me keep this broken snowflake,
‘cause the worst is over now,
And the icy blizzard will cover us
With a blanket of snowflakes,
But I want to hold you high;
So you won’t drown in this mess of snow,
I’m sorry,
There’s no one left to find;
This snowflake.

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This article has 2 comments.

lexi said...
on Jan. 16 2009 at 5:46 pm
hey cat! i love this one! there isnt anything i would change! its extremely amazing! love, lexi

on Dec. 28 2008 at 11:49 pm
I love this! You are a beautiful writer

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