Dare To Dream

December 5, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 2 comments

I dare to dream that falling in love is more than what I've experienced.

I dare to dream that broken families always find their way.

I dare to dream that angels watch above me as I write.

I dare to dream of beauty that will take my breath away.

Outside the world, inside of peace, dreams thrown over my shoulder.
Weighing me down, lifting me up, waiting for this to be over.
Sniling, frowning, laughing, silence..surviving one more day.
I dare to dream that dreaming is a dreamer's only way.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion... I hope you like my poem!

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on Nov. 27 2011 at 12:31 am
tweetiebruce PLATINUM, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like music - You can make mistakes so you try again. But when the piece can't be helped you try again another time.

this is amazing, you have a real talent. the last line really ended it well. I'm sure angels do watch over you because your poetry is brilliant:)

on Aug. 31 2011 at 9:38 am
singingdetective SILVER, Sugar Land, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Out of a world of laughter,
suddenly I am sad.
Day and night, it haunts me,
the kiss I never had"
--Midsummer by Syndey King Russell

"Chances lost are hope's torn up pages"-- "Chances" by Five for Fighting

Again-- YOU NEED TO MAKE A PUBLISHED BOOK OF POETRY. YOU WOULD MAKE MILLIONS, I SWEAR.

on Aug. 9 2011 at 8:25 pm
Brandywrote PLATINUM, San Jose, California
28 articles 10 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
“maybe I can help”

“Ah, yes, you want to be a writer don’t you?”

“You say that as if it’s a bad thing”

“No, no. just a lonely thing. Sometimes the world you create on the page seems more friendly than the lives in the world you actually live in.

This is really amazing!!!!!

faerest BRONZE said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 5:51 pm
faerest BRONZE, St Paul, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 17 comments
I totally agree with you... I love the last line... it made an impression on me.

on Jun. 4 2011 at 5:24 pm
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
13 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

Wow that has made me speechless. Literally NO WORDS! U R AN AMAZING WRITER. IF I WERE A DUDE I WOULD MARRY U IF U'D HAVE ME JK JK but really wow i love all ur work! keep it up!

on Jun. 4 2011 at 2:21 pm
A.PaigeTurner, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
You think that everybody hates you. You should really stop that.- A Good Friend

This has made me speechless.  I guess I'm lucky that I only need to type to tell you how amazing this is.  Thanks for posting it!

on Dec. 30 2010 at 3:09 pm
Chitra.I PLATINUM, Dubai, Other
44 articles 2 photos 131 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everything makes sense if you think too much about it.

The last line is like a deep flame out of ashes.

on Sep. 9 2010 at 4:36 pm
Of_The_Broken SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
God is a comedian, playing an audience to afraid to laugh.

The last line just completely blew me away

on Jun. 17 2010 at 10:26 am
Saudade_indigo PLATINUM, Winnipeg, Other
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I love the saying 'Dare to Dream' and this poem is exactly why. The last line is perfect. Good job.

on Jun. 7 2010 at 5:59 pm
Claire Teri BRONZE, Guelph, Other
4 articles 1 photo 2 comments
UN...REAL.

Emily:) said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 10:34 pm
I dare to dream that dreaming is a dreamer's only way.

I am SO jealous of that line. I wish I wrote it...grrr... WONDERFUL!

on Mar. 16 2010 at 7:34 pm
sarahgrace BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
2 articles 0 photos 8 comments
I love the last line. It is perfect. Nice job

on Jul. 6 2009 at 11:10 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

two words: loved it


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