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Numb:(

May 23, 2014
By nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
nikkifuentes BRONZE, Wimauma, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“Imagination is more important than knowledge. For knowledge is limited to all we now know and understand, while imagination embraces the entire world, and all there ever will be to know and understand.” _




Albert Einstein


The sharp edge of the razor cuts my skin easily.
im numb to the pain,
numb to the blood,
to numb to realize whats happening,
to realize what im doing
1 cut follows another and another,
till i cant stop.
the razor falls from my hand,
blood drips down my arm
tears roll down my cheeks
What have i done?



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on Jun. 4 2014 at 7:42 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

*your* my bad.

on Jun. 4 2014 at 7:42 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
87 articles 0 photos 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

The frowny face destroys all credibility this poem could have had. Keep smilies out of your poetry. It looks ridiculous and foolish. It's not exactly an original subject either, and the grammar needs work. I'm certain you're other poem is better? 2.5/5

on Jun. 2 2014 at 4:11 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Lovely writing!!