Theory

November 29, 2008
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I believe that the world
Will end in a fire
So the desire
Causing this
Quagmire
Fries
And dies

I'd soon tire
And go with ice
Which implies
A soul who promises lies
And dies
Detours from Hell
And is captured
Eternally in a shell
Of turquoise glory

Humanity dies
And it cannot suffice
A soul who is truly unwise
And supposes she will be able to see
How humanity dies





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Hope said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 3:56 pm
this was asome, i loved it i wanna see more of ur work keep writting
 
mariasalami This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 5:44 pm
hello hope,
thank you for your admiration.
i actually have a teeink account, this poem somehow didn't show up as mine
my username is mariasalami, i have a couple more poems there. i hope to be uploading some new ones soon.
thank you for your support!!
 
kiwi12 said...
Aug. 11, 2009 at 12:26 am
It's interesting and the rhythm works. It's really cool. Nice.
 
mariasalami This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 1:19 am
thank you again!
 
theorywriter said...
Feb. 23, 2009 at 1:07 am
Thank you so much!

You don't know how much of an accolade that you have given me

I truly appreciate it!!
 
Redemption65 said...
Dec. 14, 2008 at 8:51 pm
I believe in what this poem says, and this flow is incredible. You are an incredibly, phenomenal writer.
 
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