Dear Lord

November 29, 2008
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Can you help me breathe?
Can you help me believe?
All i use to trust
was nothing but pure lust
Can you help me feel
CAn you help me reveal
Time passes by me
Still no clue what i need
my mind just needs to be free
of all the pain and misery
my mind always goes back to before
of those memories i use to adore
but now hurt me to the core
Hurting myself again
i feel no pain
i feel no shame
Can you help me now lord?
Can you help me move foward
i need to move foward towards a better reality
more real morality
god help me please





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Hope said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 4:01 pm
this is my favorite poem now, its better than any robert frost or any other auther's work!
 
kiwi12 said...
Aug. 11, 2009 at 12:27 am
I love this one. I can totally relate to it. You're an amazing writer.
Check out my work!;)
 
KatSev7venn said...
Jan. 11, 2009 at 12:08 am
Great poem. Even someone that had never felt that way before could understand how you were feeling. Keep up the good work.

<3 Kat7
 
BlackGirlWriting said...
Jan. 2, 2009 at 1:36 am
i like this, i can definately relate to it. i think you should keep writing and see how much you grow and mature in it. it'll definately get you some where. =]
 
sunnysmiles17 said...
Dec. 29, 2008 at 7:00 pm
LUV THIS POEM. personally i can totally relate to it. i think it flowed nicely and rhyming was great. keep writing becuase the world needs more poems like this. =)
 
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