Time To Think Cut Short

November 26, 2008
By Andrewsaur BRONZE, La Porte, Texas
Andrewsaur BRONZE, La Porte, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Time brings all things to life, in that I trust it so.\\\\\\\" ~ Willie Stark


Sitting in a room
with a look-a-like mind
and a sound-a-like soul
watching the bag get empty
the world can't comprehend
the worth of this nothing
I watch the world go sideways
from the other side of the window
glass so sad I want to end its misery
and take in the view
Three years left
and it'll all be over
like the time we had has ended
no more do we sit and wait
for nothing to happen but sit and wait for the end of the world
which came quicker than we had expected
then the trip to the past
didn't stop when we thought
when it finally ends
it'll never be the same.

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james14 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 29 2012 at 2:19 pm
james14 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Worst excuse for not turning in homework: 'I couldn't find anyone to copy it from'".

i luv this!!!!!!!! beautiful!!!

Kiyoko GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2010 at 11:51 pm
Kiyoko GOLD, Knoxville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Independence is my happiness, I view things as they are without regard to place or person. My country is the world, and my religion is to do good. - Thomas Paine

This is really good! I think this is my favorite of your poems, especially the beginning of it. just a suggestion, be careful to use words like "nothing" or "nowhere." they are pretty strong words, and probably should be used when making a point, not as filler. Make sure you know why you're using each word!

on Jun. 23 2010 at 10:08 am
-daydreamer- SILVER, Smyrna, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe.... Carpe diem. Seize the day, boys. Make your lives extraordinary." ---Robin Williams, "Dead Poets Society"

"Sitting in a room with a look-a-like mind and a sound-a-like soul" Loved it!

on May. 10 2010 at 7:28 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Like other commenters, i think that your writing is spontaneously amazing! What was your first masterpiece?

skyler SILVER said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 9:28 pm
skyler SILVER, Tayllorsville, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
live to love and love to live

confusing the first time through but after reading it again i understood the deep thought

on Oct. 27 2009 at 7:24 pm
Andrewsaur BRONZE, La Porte, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\\\\\"Time brings all things to life, in that I trust it so.\\\\\\\" ~ Willie Stark

It was almost two years ago. I have this friend who writes as well and he just really got me into it and I started doing it more and more until it became this amazing part of my life.

Kass_ BRONZE said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 5:30 pm
Kass_ BRONZE, Uvalde, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."-A.A. Milne

You're really good. I mean I just really like your work :)

on Oct. 24 2009 at 11:13 am
firefly116 BRONZE, Southern Pines, North Carolina
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i really like the imagery in this. it makes ur point in a sideways way that i love. your thoughts seem spontaneous and original. great work.

P.S. when did u know u loved writing(just curiosity)?


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