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Before She Fell

April 22, 2014
By _em26 SILVER, Milltown,
_em26 SILVER, Milltown,
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Once we accept our limits, we must go beyond them. -Albert Einstein


A rush of wind,
a silent call.
Standing, waiting,
about to fall.

Waiting, hoping,
by some lucky chance,
That someone will notice,
rescue her from this death dance.

Dreaming, remembering,
a different world.
The happiest moments,
before the colors muddled and swirled.

One last breath,
she's too far gone.
Alone to weep,
to break her earthly bond.

It's all too quick,
this descent to hell.
Could've been prevented,
except
Nobody caught her
before she fell.



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on Oct. 24 2014 at 8:07 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Yah! I'll go read it now :)

_em26 SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2014 at 4:23 pm
_em26 SILVER, Milltown,
6 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Once we accept our limits, we must go beyond them. -Albert Einstein

Thankyouthankyouthankyou!! And actually another one of my poems was just posted if you want to check it outtttt :)

on Oct. 21 2014 at 5:48 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This is very meanignful and just amazing :) I love the way you say that she wants to be caught, and then go on towards the end to say that it was too late, because no one tried to catch her. A beautiful piece in my opinion :) Keep writing my friend, I want to read some more of your work! CX

on May. 1 2014 at 3:19 pm
JJ_Lone PLATINUM, Davenport, Washington
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awesome poem. you could have done a little more work on it like maybe made it longer. but other wise really good. 4/5