Spearmint MAG

November 25, 2008
By Dakota Davis SILVER, Westwood, Kansas
Dakota Davis SILVER, Westwood, Kansas
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Spearmint was always the taste in my mouth when I kissed you
Because we were always walking together after seventh hour
And I always got four spearmint candies in seventh hour
And I always had one in my mouth
Now you walk with your hand in Margaret Dickinson's
And I walk a few steps behind you
With my spearmint candy
And
Bite
Down



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on Jan. 30 2010 at 7:38 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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sooo sweet <3

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on Jan. 30 2010 at 12:20 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
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Great poem! I love the simplicity and you can feel how the sweet taste of spearmint has grown bitter! I love the contrast!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:24 pm
AlexandraRose BRONZE, Port Hardy, Other
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why is that alll you ever comment?

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:24 pm
AlexandraRose BRONZE, Port Hardy, Other
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why is that all you ever comment!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 6:23 pm
AlexandraRose BRONZE, Port Hardy, Other
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Wow! this is really , really good!

on Jan. 25 2010 at 11:07 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

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