Collapsed Alone

November 25, 2008
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The fire burned in my gut
My red eyes slammed shut
The volcano erupted and shook violently

It sent searing steam blowing
Hot, crushing embers glowing
And I collapsed alone into the darkness

Now cold and scared, feeling nude
An old, rolled-up clump, so crude
How I wished to wake in your arms





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LouisFisher said...
Dec. 19, 2008 at 3:48 am
I am happy people are voing on mine, but i am not getting much feedback. Please comment on how you personally interpret this poem.
 
connabella said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 3:01 am
pure raw talent
 
BEWolf13 said...
Dec. 9, 2008 at 1:38 am
Hey Louis that was great! Very deep and emotional.. I used to love writing poetry. Keep up the good work and someday you'll be autographing a book for us!

Love ya!
Ricki
 
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