Collapsed Alone

November 25, 2008
By lyrn2200 GOLD, Norfolk, Virginia
lyrn2200 GOLD, Norfolk, Virginia
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The fire burned in my gut
My red eyes slammed shut
The volcano erupted and shook violently

It sent searing steam blowing
Hot, crushing embers glowing
And I collapsed alone into the darkness

Now cold and scared, feeling nude
An old, rolled-up clump, so crude
How I wished to wake in your arms


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LouisFisher said...
on Dec. 19 2008 at 3:48 am
I am happy people are voing on mine, but i am not getting much feedback. Please comment on how you personally interpret this poem.

connabella said...
on Dec. 18 2008 at 3:01 am
pure raw talent

BEWolf13 said...
on Dec. 9 2008 at 1:38 am
Hey Louis that was great! Very deep and emotional.. I used to love writing poetry. Keep up the good work and someday you'll be autographing a book for us!



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