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Frozenover

April 2, 2014
By tribehybridhornets SILVER, Waban, Massachusetts
tribehybridhornets SILVER, Waban, Massachusetts
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See, ice took me:

it has grown;
I notice it pass on the street.

Water keeps me company at this table in

long

long

drops.


The author's comments:
This is an erasure poem, derived from Charles Simic's "The Partial Explanation". I felt "The Partial Explanation" succeeded at how it established a setting, and I wanted to try to establish a different setting using some of Simic's wording.

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