Ever Again

If I cry, will you laugh with glee?
If I smile, will you be furiously angry with me?

I wonder who you are and how powerful you could be.
I wander your beautiful eyes to find something I could see.

Can I lay here on lust's white bed?
May I be wrath's holy stained liquid red?

Shall I cry not if you die?
May I just easily lie?

I want to listen to pride's soft song.
Even if it takes too terribly long.

Be sloth's little being...
that hid away my crystalline bloody ring!

Shy away.....
Listen to what you loudly say!

Be my lord of lavished love,
and crush light's white dove.

Take me in the pitch black dark...
Now brand me with your sinned mark!


Lay a unholy kiss upon me now,
and don't ask me even ever how...!...





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kaykay11 said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 12:17 am
thank you:) lol
 
auntwings said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 8:57 pm
I did like the poem. Nice tone and rhyme.I would give it four stars, if rate meter was easy to figure out. LOL
 
kaykay said...
Nov. 29, 2008 at 7:13 am
done :) thanx
 
semiweet said...
Nov. 23, 2008 at 3:37 am
I really like your simple rhyming, it flows very well. You write so mysteriously, that I can't tell if this is a positive or negative poem!! I write pretty bluntly, but I love creating metaphors.

Can you comment on my poem? I would really love to hear your review. It's called Alone Again, by Christina G. Thanks
 
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