As I'm Carried Away

November 7, 2008
By ezsmilesannemarie GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
ezsmilesannemarie GOLD, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Walking through the water’s tongue of caress,
The powdery sand of the soft current press;
Cooling my blood, the deep silky sea,
Running along my skin with luxury;
Flickering light glimpsing through cracks of stones,
And the sun kissing tenderly the depth of my bones;
My lips, quivering with the whip of the wind,
Circling around my face that has faded...thinned;
A smile breaks over my face from release,
The proximity of Heaven’s prevailing peace;
Unnerving the flesh that has grown aged by day,
Replenishes my spirit as I’m carried away.



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on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:31 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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oo and Seinfeld

on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:31 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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This is so deep and beautiful . . . like the water. I love the lines: A smile breaks over my face from release,

The proximity of Heaven’s prevailing peace;

Unnerving the flesh that has grown aged by day . . .



P.S. I saw your "About Me." I love Jane Eyre, Bob Dylan, the Beatles, and Johnny Depp too. Funny.

on Dec. 3 2008 at 9:06 pm
Thanks!! I know, I'll always be squeeners, and you'll always be writerchickwithfeelings. =D

on Dec. 3 2008 at 3:09 am
Hey Squeeners! I guess your name in Anne Marie... It's pretty. Your still Squeeners to me though!!! hehe. I like this poem. It's so sweet. Totally deep. =D


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