War Verse 1

November 4, 2008
By K.J.G. Santos, Long Beach, CA

the screams and the thunder are all i can hear
with blood on my face washing my fear.
there is no turning back; the line has been drawn.
i sit and i pray that i'll make it 'til dawn...

The author's comments:
This popped up while watching a war video at school. I didn't know what to call it.

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Sunshine said...
on Nov. 27 2008 at 12:53 am
This is pretty good but it feels incomplete to me. Maybe you should add more lines and write a little more. Good start though. I'd love to see more of your work because this is good.


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