War Verse 1

November 4, 2008
the screams and the thunder are all i can hear
with blood on my face washing my fear.
there is no turning back; the line has been drawn.
i sit and i pray that i'll make it 'til dawn...

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Sunshine said...
Nov. 27, 2008 at 12:53 am
This is pretty good but it feels incomplete to me. Maybe you should add more lines and write a little more. Good start though. I'd love to see more of your work because this is good.
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