Time

Time
A thing so
strange and
mysterious
nobody knows
how it works
what
forever
really means and
why
no one here on earth
can control it
at all.
Time is
water
slowly dripping
from a
leaking faucet
Time is
water
sweeping everything
in its path
away
rushing down
the side of a
mountain.
Time is
water
cupped
in my hands
and
no matter
how hard I try
to keep it in
it's still
slipping
out the cracks
that are invisible
to me.





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jonas_chic899 said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 9:05 am
i like how u related time to water!! awesome:DDDDDDDD
 
messie.egghead said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 11:01 pm

i like this a whole bunch.

i like how you space the words.

it gives it a real cool feel.

 
OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 7:14 pm
thanks for commenting on my poetry
i can relate to this to i love it its very real
 
TheUnknownGuest said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 3:36 pm
Thank you for your comment! I like this poem.... Great job! I'm going to read the rest of yours when I'm less bussy :)
Feel free to give me more advice on my stories/ poems. I could really use it!!
 
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