The Perfect Place

October 20, 2008
By Brii_Bear BRONZE, Joliet, Illinois
Brii_Bear BRONZE, Joliet, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Live IN The MOMENT lifes too short"


Take me to where the roads are paved with gold
And the sun glistens in the cold
Where every kid has a family
where everyone is as happy as claims
and the leaves begin to expand
take me to this place called
the perfect world don't
take me to that other world
cause that place is too down
and scary too sad and bad
I really wish it wasn't that
way but that's life and we got
to live so destroy the world and take me to the perfect place.


The author's comments:
Im really creative

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Kelly903 said...
on Jul. 9 2009 at 6:22 am
I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SO DEEP IT ALSO HAS SO MUCH MEANING TO IT I LOVE IT!!!


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