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IF U ONLY KNEW

October 18, 2008
By BUCKETZ123 BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
BUCKETZ123 BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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IF U ONLY KNEW HALF THE STUFF I BEEN THREW I DONT HAVE TIME TO I JUST PICK UP MA PENCIL WRITE,WRITE TELL U ABOUT WHAT I DID LAST NIGHT IT WAS THAT COULD"NT EVEN PLAY IT WAS SO DARK I JUST SAT AND CRIED CAUSE I REALLY CARED ABOUT YOU. YOU WAS OLDEST SISTER MADE THEM PATHS FOR ME 2 FOLLOW NOW I SIT HERE CANT EVEN SWALLOW ARE THINK STRAIGHT WHEN THEY TOLD ME MY MIND WENT BLINK COULD"NT EVEN STAND UP STRAIGHT NOW I JUST SIT HERE AND REALIZE THE WAY WE PLAY OUT IN THESE STREETS WILL HAVE U THINKIN BOUT GETTIN KILLED AT THE AGE OF 15 COMIN FROM A PARTY DOIN YOUR OWN THINK AND THESE TWO GUYS PULLED UP AND HAD TO SAY SOMETHING THEN IT ALL FLIPPED AND SLIPPED GOT OUT OF HAND NOW 1 LAYS IN A CELLAR BED WHILE ANOTHER IS DEAD

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THIS POAM IS RELLY DEEP 2 ME BECAUSE IT REALLY HAPPEND I LOST MA OLDEST SISTER AT THE AGE OF 15 BECAUSE SHE WAS BEING HERSELF

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on Jul. 21 2009 at 2:08 pm
montreal132 SILVER, Rush, New York
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impressive voice due to diction; i liked it alot