Real Popularity

November 7, 2013
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Satan likes to use this lure
To make you think it's popular
You shouldn't have a fit
Because everyone is doing it
It will make you feel high
That is not a lie
But that's not all
Then you will fall
Sinking lower than you were
Do you feel popular?

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KaylaaLovee said...
Nov. 11, 2013 at 8:20 pm
I like the consept of this poem. I think to improve it a little, show more comparisson and have a direct "Hit" to what you're trying to get at :) Nice job .
Nommoc replied...
Nov. 11, 2013 at 9:27 pm
Thank you so much! I'm not very good at editing so your critique really helps. :)
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