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November 7, 2013
By Nommoc GOLD, Jackson, Tennessee
Nommoc GOLD, Jackson, Tennessee
19 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Roses are red. Violets are blue. An original poem is long overdue.


Satan likes to use this lure
To make you think it's popular
You shouldn't have a fit
Because everyone is doing it
It will make you feel high
That is not a lie
But that's not all
Then you will fall
Sinking lower than you were
Do you feel popular?


The author's comments:
I've been going throughout the motions too much lately. I hope you feel inspired by this. Enjoy

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Nommoc GOLD said...
on Nov. 11 2013 at 9:27 pm
Nommoc GOLD, Jackson, Tennessee
19 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Roses are red. Violets are blue. An original poem is long overdue.

Thank you so much! I'm not very good at editing so your critique really helps. :)

on Nov. 11 2013 at 8:20 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
14 articles 1 photo 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

I like the consept of this poem. I think to improve it a little, show more comparisson and have a direct "Hit" to what you're trying to get at :) Nice job .