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Five and I'm Alive

October 4, 2008
By Anonymous

I'm looking.
Do you see me?
My eyes are flying around this room.
It doesn't belong to me.
Not I, who would rather be flying along side my eyes.

I'm listening.
Do you hear me?
My ears are concentrating on this voice.
It doesn't belong to me.
Not I, who would rather be concentrating along side my ears.

I'm savoring.
Do you taste me?
My tongue is racing from this flavor.
It doesn't belong to me.
Not I, who would rather be racing along side my tongue.

I'm smelling.
Do you scent me?
My nose is holding onto this aroma.
It doesn't belong to me.
Not I, who would rathr be holding along side my nose.

I'm touching.
Do you feel me?
My fingers are grasping this wonder in my hand.
It doesn't belong to me.
Not I, who would rather be grasping along side my hand.

I'm alive.
Do you live with me?
My soul is beautiful and high.
It belongs to me.
Yes I, who has always been beautiful and high along side my soul.


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on Dec. 21 2010 at 10:58 am
Thankyou, very much! :) I actually need to upload alot more. :/

on Dec. 16 2010 at 5:28 pm
TrueHeartAndSoul BRONZE, Fort Walton Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe In Yourself And You Will Go Far As For You Are Young And Can Remain Beautiful For The Nights And Days Of Your Life."
"u-we-tsi a-ge-hu-tsa"

I'm Digging It!!! Great Descriptive Meaning!!!