" A Walk in the Sun

October 1, 2008
Sunshine and shadows
cover the morning ground as
we blue soliders march

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reaper 1178 said...
Oct. 10, 2008 at 6:15 pm
amazing civil war poem
sroland said...
Oct. 10, 2008 at 6:09 pm
I love the imagary. With just a few words, I know this is war.
TabbyG said...
Oct. 10, 2008 at 6:01 pm
The detail of your poem gives me an image in my mind of what the soldiers are wearing and where they are.
magen said...
Oct. 10, 2008 at 6:00 pm
I like your poem. It makes me picture it.
AirBorne101st said...
Oct. 6, 2008 at 2:47 am
i am a man of few words im quite and shy i put this haiku on here cause my english teacher said it was really good so i wanted to see what teen ink would say
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