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Bliss

September 16, 2008
By Anonymous

you smile.
he smiles.
and all is right in the world.
you call out to him.
he runs to you.
and all is right in the world.
you hold his hand.
he kisses your forehead.
and all is right in the world.
he says I love you.
you say I love you.
and all is right in the world.
you rest your head.
he holds you to sleep.
and all is right
in the world.

The author's comments:
I had never thought of myself as a poet. honestly, i still dont. but this was my first attempt at a real poem. a poem with feeling. it is still a work in prgress. but i thought it would be nice to see what kind of feedback i could get. :)

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