Eyes

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Look into my eyes and you may see
See the real person inside, the true me
Look in my eyes and you may find
Just by a look you can read my mind
Look into my eyes and you may realize
Whether or not I’m feeding you lies
Look into my eyes and you may comprehend
All that I’ll do to help a friend
Look into my eyes and you may see
See the real person inside, the true me





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Jocelia P. said...
Oct. 22, 2008 at 1:32 pm
It's a pretty good poem. I think it could be a little better, but i like it. Maybe you could add a little more feeling. I think that would make it a little better.
 
Cierra H. said...
Oct. 27, 2008 at 8:36 pm
I agree with you, it's not my best work, I know.
 
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