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All annoying here and here someone abused,

But then I saw a silhouette covering the front blank wall partially, in which I use to glance,

I t was then when I first saw you, thou covered my heart,
Showed me a ray, ray of hope,

And you simply became an eye catcher from deep of my heart,
You held my hand and I right on ran away,

Not even thinking of something of thee,
Something which was glistening in your eyes,

Now here I am shining in the starlight and there are you beneath that dark blue sky with your frizzled grown hairs,

A loon, loon in love as you filled that blank wall by my name,

But yet I was unwilling to help thou,

Was that my pride?
Or
Call it my fear to again face you.



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LiraDaeris said...
May 3, 2013 at 2:42 am
This is cute and conveys the emotions of the cahracter in the story. I like how you showed her fear. My only critiques would be the word "Annoying" in the beginning doesn't seem to fit with the word "abused," and "use" needs to be "used." Good job!
 
LariElaine said...
May 2, 2013 at 11:34 pm
Pretty awesome, dont know why it reminded me of someone, but it did, good job! keep writting!
 
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