Report Abuse Home > All Poetry > 'If but my hope would return' 'If but my hope would return' By rockyyyyyyyyy, lawrenceville, GA More by this author and my love as the tides do, may then my tumultuos heart go on a' palpatating. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 6 comments. Post your own! Report abuse compassion said... today at 2:14 am: Exquisite! The comparisions are just impeccable. love it! Report abuse necci said... Jun. 28 at 2:56 am: Thats lovely, the language and metaphor was perfect. Report abuse Jade.I.Am said... Jun. 27 at 4:51 pm: I like your language in this, and the metaphor. I think you could have expanded though! XD Report abuse sarahrose314 said... May 31 at 3:42 pm: I really love your pieces! This one is relatable and left me wanting more. The length is part of its beauty I think. Report abuse Iloveme said... May 22 at 3:17 pm: I loved it so much I had to save it. Amazing:) Words I never would want to forget Report abuse Mckay said... May 15 at 8:27 pm: Why must you be so talented? This is shorter than your other poems. Nonetheless, amazing.